Answering the class post i will describe my classmates.Amanda: she has about 18 years old, quiet, cute, black eyes and black hair.
Fernanda: she has about 14 years old, she use glasses,quiet, slim, brown eyes and black hair.
Teacher Gutemberg: he has about 28 years old, slim, tall, black eyes, black hair, elegant and communicative.
Great Marcia,
ResponderExcluirbut there are still some things we need to check... Let's correct then :)
1. IT'S NOT NECESSARY TO SAY THAT >>>>>>>>>>>> "Answering the class post i will describe my classmates."
2. (Amanda: she has about 18 years old, quiet, cute, black eyes and black hair.)
YOU CAN SAY:
"Amanda: IS about 18 years old. SHE IS quiet AND cute AND SHE HAS black eyes and black hair. ON THE PICTURE SHE IS WEARING...
P.S. "THE REST OF THE TEXT IS EXACTLY THE SAME, SO U SUGGEST YOU TO THE EXAMPLES ON YOUR CLASSBOOK. YOU ALSO NEED TO ENRICH YOUR DESCRIPTIONS"
TEACHER